tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post6881553759448100628..comments2024-03-23T04:19:04.366-04:00Comments on Are we there yet?: Some Things Dark and DangerousAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-143389493415554052011-10-27T14:37:44.037-04:002011-10-27T14:37:44.037-04:00You just gave me an idea for another story, robeia...You just gave me an idea for another story, robeiae. lolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-38432515441967896502011-10-27T14:27:56.505-04:002011-10-27T14:27:56.505-04:00Better a clown than a mime, I always say.
Nice wo...Better a clown than a mime, I always say.<br /><br />Nice work!robeiaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17145457789511566198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-71173829385169270452011-10-24T07:29:35.920-04:002011-10-24T07:29:35.920-04:00One of my favorites too, Diana. Thanks for stoppin...One of my favorites too, Diana. Thanks for stopping by. I can't wait for next month's challenge!! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-24897950911234027842011-10-22T22:44:59.675-04:002011-10-22T22:44:59.675-04:00"His breath sprayed a warm mist onto the inte..."His breath sprayed a warm mist onto the interior of his plastic mask, the moisture sent droplets down the walls like sweat running off a cold beer can on a hot, sunny day."<br />This I liked. I would be very upset if a clown I created killed me and did not have the courtesy to pull up his own manuscript and hit "send."Dianahttp://blog.dianarajchel.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-76209670329376236682011-10-18T22:08:23.406-04:002011-10-18T22:08:23.406-04:00Claire, thanks for stopping by. The posthumous pub...Claire, thanks for stopping by. The posthumous publishing I had to add, you know that. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-27492987197810160302011-10-18T20:58:00.785-04:002011-10-18T20:58:00.785-04:00Nice dying scene--it felt so realistic, even the p...Nice dying scene--it felt so realistic, even the part about the posthumous publishing. LOL Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-34253467448858825502011-10-16T21:44:06.828-04:002011-10-16T21:44:06.828-04:00Thank you, Doc! My shift in POV I didn't think...Thank you, Doc! My shift in POV I didn't think anyone would pick up on, so thank you!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-25036979970565911482011-10-16T20:19:56.724-04:002011-10-16T20:19:56.724-04:00The condensation on the inside of the mask, the to...The condensation on the inside of the mask, the tongue sticking out of the little hole, all great relatable bits that put the reader right in the story! "Hey Lucy, I'm home" again, so realistic.<br /><br />The shift of POV was very effective and well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-73509735618528598152011-10-13T21:19:46.722-04:002011-10-13T21:19:46.722-04:00Thank you, Desert! I just hope people realize that...Thank you, Desert! I just hope people realize that I'm not into self-mutilation...I just realize I have a wicked mind and all that, just want an outlet for my internal muse. :D<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-13987877328456063702011-10-13T19:41:43.190-04:002011-10-13T19:41:43.190-04:00Clowns are suppose to be funny and sweet but we kn...Clowns are suppose to be funny and sweet but we know that behind the mask they are not what they seem. I enjoyed your post. Scary. I think you need a bandaid or something. LOL. Intangible Heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05047040538015079182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-15789942196387571642011-10-11T21:08:59.065-04:002011-10-11T21:08:59.065-04:00Clowns are so creepy, they should have their own g...Clowns are so creepy, they should have their own genre, Erin!! lolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-63830561203415038392011-10-11T20:59:54.426-04:002011-10-11T20:59:54.426-04:00Nicely done and I thought of Stephen King as well ...Nicely done and I thought of Stephen King as well :). Clowns are just creepy, aren't they?Erin Brambillahttp://www.erinbrambilla.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-21477242814022673142011-10-11T18:25:57.656-04:002011-10-11T18:25:57.656-04:00Thank you Jonathan. You know, in the holiday spiri...Thank you Jonathan. You know, in the holiday spirit and all. :) Teehee!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-39468246352307105172011-10-11T17:55:51.458-04:002011-10-11T17:55:51.458-04:00Very well written, Diane! Loved it, and I don'...Very well written, Diane! Loved it, and I don't like dark stories :-).Jonathan Miller IIhttp://forallmyefforts.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-62596331607118375312011-10-09T14:02:14.230-04:002011-10-09T14:02:14.230-04:00Diane, I had to slip that in there, you KNOW I had...Diane, I had to slip that in there, you KNOW I had to. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-62216376089390208272011-10-09T13:38:03.348-04:002011-10-09T13:38:03.348-04:00I laughed out loud at the end. She's dying and...I laughed out loud at the end. She's dying and all she can think about is her story. Typical writer, LOL!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-89404123451964087592011-10-08T21:38:42.483-04:002011-10-08T21:38:42.483-04:00Awesome feedback, Alynza and Alex. I didn't kn...Awesome feedback, Alynza and Alex. I didn't know that about King, he's my favorite author!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-52787286536422088322011-10-08T21:17:41.527-04:002011-10-08T21:17:41.527-04:00It's a little known fact that Stephen King was...It's a little known fact that Stephen King was nearly killed by a pandimensional clown while writing "It."<br /><br />Seriously, though, nice job. The viewpoint shift in the middle is really nifty.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-50218292625936101682011-10-08T20:08:56.217-04:002011-10-08T20:08:56.217-04:00The anticipation from the clown was seamless. Darn...The anticipation from the clown was seamless. Darn creepy clowns, they'll get you every time. :)Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-60879709285620849692011-10-08T13:01:45.616-04:002011-10-08T13:01:45.616-04:00Yea, a friend of mine has a phobia about clowns. :...Yea, a friend of mine has a phobia about clowns. :)<br /><br />I changed the POV at the end to show a shift, that she actually conjured the clown via her manuscript. Glad you got that! Thanks for stopping by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-88238607379178330752011-10-08T12:51:52.579-04:002011-10-08T12:51:52.579-04:00I felt as if she was writing her own story or as i...I felt as if she was writing her own story or as if the story came to life and killed her. <br /><br />Still, clowns are creepy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com