tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post8053677788805938047..comments2024-03-23T04:19:04.366-04:00Comments on Are we there yet?: Creative Writing - The WindowAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-48439035213528020072012-07-02T10:25:45.794-04:002012-07-02T10:25:45.794-04:00But I do feel bad about your teeth!But I do feel bad about your teeth!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-27812769438386852042012-07-02T10:24:53.140-04:002012-07-02T10:24:53.140-04:00I read them one by one to my husband. The ones he ...I read them one by one to my husband. The ones he laughed at (there were 2 or 3) I put in a hat and drew your name! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-17344050243582992322012-07-02T10:09:40.776-04:002012-07-02T10:09:40.776-04:00Diane thanks for picking me for the caption contes...Diane thanks for picking me for the caption contest winner! Was it a sympathy vote due to the fact my teeth were almost knocked out? Anyway it sure helped make my day!Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14814382247648362550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-80368320723854558592012-06-30T14:56:06.150-04:002012-06-30T14:56:06.150-04:00Thank you! A student in the same class also said i...Thank you! A student in the same class also said it was beautifully haunting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-60507069175834675162012-06-30T10:34:58.143-04:002012-06-30T10:34:58.143-04:00Oh wow, I love it! Beautiful and haunting :)
Andr...Oh wow, I love it! Beautiful and haunting :)<br /><br />AndreaAndrea Teaganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050710871603076745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-78462550746377448542012-06-29T16:34:52.413-04:002012-06-29T16:34:52.413-04:00Now if I could do that for another 200 pages I mig...Now if I could do that for another 200 pages I might can write that novel! LolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-91053020501231935712012-06-29T16:15:46.237-04:002012-06-29T16:15:46.237-04:00I'm not a fiction expert but it grabs your att...I'm not a fiction expert but it grabs your attention and holds it to the end.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14814382247648362550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-85863739095312288032012-06-29T08:55:50.331-04:002012-06-29T08:55:50.331-04:00Thank you! :)Thank you! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-5390833677900390322012-06-29T01:29:48.299-04:002012-06-29T01:29:48.299-04:00I would say you accomplished the creativity part o...I would say you accomplished the creativity part of your assignment and it was great, so that is just a bonus!Crack You Whiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03071785490304845124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-1513183873670851392012-06-28T18:15:31.708-04:002012-06-28T18:15:31.708-04:00Yes, a window which serves as a portal as well, me...Yes, a window which serves as a portal as well, metaphorically! :D<br /><br />Thanks for your feedback.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-28804103924148546212012-06-28T17:57:51.295-04:002012-06-28T17:57:51.295-04:00Interesting! I bet you were the only one who came...Interesting! I bet you were the only one who came up with a window in a closet door.Manuel Royalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392229225958688128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-1327568676231278972012-06-28T14:02:51.255-04:002012-06-28T14:02:51.255-04:00Thank you, randi! It was a class I took from Gotha...Thank you, randi! It was a class I took from Gotham Writer's Workshop. Awesome instructors there. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-17114961561685379692012-06-28T14:01:31.668-04:002012-06-28T14:01:31.668-04:00Thanks Sharon!Thanks Sharon!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-68158938364258870142012-06-28T12:53:13.882-04:002012-06-28T12:53:13.882-04:00Diane, for the first story you ever wrote this is ...Diane, for the first story you ever wrote this is really, really good. I’m impressed—super impressed, even. Very creative and I like the ebb and flow of it. Every paragraph transitions into the next one quite nicely and the reader is never once broken from that flow by any insignificant or sloppily placed details (big pet peeve of mine.) Again, for a first, you had all the right stuff. Good job!!!<br /><br />I don’t recall what my first real story was (aside from “The Cheetah that Went to the People Zoo” from, you know, third grade…) but I’m pretty sure it was a Sailor Moon fan-fiction, a ha ha.<br />:)randi leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14207001299508931034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-64402427156149530362012-06-28T11:24:40.462-04:002012-06-28T11:24:40.462-04:00great job. Very sad...great job. Very sad...Sharon Stognerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12732141088637958862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-79227965625616359852012-06-28T07:19:50.112-04:002012-06-28T07:19:50.112-04:00Thank you for the feedback, Karla! My first crack ...Thank you for the feedback, Karla! My first crack at flash.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-12399997651740142232012-06-28T00:10:40.248-04:002012-06-28T00:10:40.248-04:00Ooh!I really, really enjoyed this!Ooh!I really, really enjoyed this!Karla Gomezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17462097054509737042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-75984868961366982042012-06-27T16:57:51.495-04:002012-06-27T16:57:51.495-04:00Eve, my closet is the worst closet ever. It would ...Eve, my closet is the worst closet ever. It would be dreadful if there were a window there. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-80246081557193139212012-06-27T16:57:10.674-04:002012-06-27T16:57:10.674-04:00Thanks Kelly! Glad you could stop by.Thanks Kelly! Glad you could stop by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-71836033250554416262012-06-27T16:30:31.496-04:002012-06-27T16:30:31.496-04:00Great piece but a closet in my case anyway is kind...Great piece but a closet in my case anyway is kind of dusty and restricting. It is cool though that it forces us inside where any other window faces the outside. Very neat. Intangible Heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05047040538015079182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4351235520870325177.post-22235350076869224012012-06-27T16:25:07.241-04:002012-06-27T16:25:07.241-04:00Great emotion in this piece! Wow!Great emotion in this piece! Wow!Kelly Hashwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936313159809041986noreply@blogger.com